The Personal Statement – Getting Started
By: Kaplan - posted Jan 25th 2010 at 4:38 PMBy Carleen Eaton, M.D.
To a writer, there is nothing more intimidating than being faced with a blank screen. That sight induces the average person to check their e-mail, browse the web, grab a snack and do just about anything to avoid having to type a single character. While this technique will keep you in touch with your friends and ensure that you are up to date on breaking news, it won’t get your personal statement written – or at least not very quickly.
At this point, you may not be ready to sit down and write your entire personal statement for the AMCAS application; however, it is not too early to start generating ideas and jotting those down. This way, you will avoid the dreaded blank screen and will instead be sitting down to a page full of notes and thoughts that will get you going. In later entries, I’ll discuss how to choose among these ideas and shape them into a focused, engaging piece of writing.
As you begin this process, keep in mind that the personal statement is not meant to be a recap of every activity, award, class and achievement that you have had in your premedical career. Instead, this is your chance to describe to the committee why you want to be a physician, what qualities you posses that would make you a good physician and help them to get to know who you are beyond just your GPA and MCAT score.
Instead of turning the personal statement into a resume, choose a few of the more interesting, unique or meaningful experiences you have had and discuss those in greater depth. A fundamental principle of good writing is to “show don’t tell.” Use anecdotes and examples to illustrate your message. After all, saying “I am a hard worker.” is pretty boring, whereas stating “Although my shift had ended hours earlier, I stayed on, caught up in the intensity of the ER.” is more compelling and personal.
The anecdotes you use don’t need to be overly dramatic and can be culled from both your medical and non-medical experiences. The first step is to jot down memorable events and situations. The best scenarios are those that that illustrate a point about your motivation to enter medicine or the skills and qualities that make you a great fit for the profession. These could be anything from recalling the day you finally got results from your research, to the first time you set foot in the O.R., or making it to the finals with your cross country team.
This process takes time, but by writing down ideas as they come, you are developing a list of examples to draw from later on. With a little inspiration, and a lot of proofreading, you can turn your notes into a great personal statement that will grab the reader’s attention, keep them interested and leave them ready to offer you an interview so that they can find out more.